The Dreaming Lady
The deep black sky
I must say, is at its prime
Patronizing infinite glittering jewels
That steal the show
But Alas, there is no one to witness the spectacle
Coz everyone has slipped into a dreamy slumber
The night is chilly yet pleasing
Somewhere in the mountains
A lady gazes fondly at the sky
The jewels staring back at her
Her beauty, she finds incomplete without them
But she can choose only one
Like her companions
She craves for the moon
The majestic of them all
The dominating one
But Alas, she is afraid
Afraid of its ability to exhibit multiple facades
Her searching eyes lay on the brightest star
Twinkling with all its ingenuity
Makes her think; this is the one
But Alas, the star is a weakling
As she won’t relish the company
Of one who vacillates all the time
It’s the morning star then, she guesses
Bigger than the biggest star
Brighter than the moon itself
But Alas, it’s a mere servant which
Duly revolves around its king
And the king pays him in light
He keeps to himself
and is a rare sight
Puzzled, she returns to her warm chamber
Just to find herself smiling at the dimming embers.
katal…!!
I never thought your English is this good…:P
hehe…Trying is the only option you have !! Explore it !! 😀
beautiful! The imagery and symbolism in the poem is awesome. your best till date 🙂
lol…I guess !!
Wonderful poem 🙂
You like the imagery.. and are enjoying but at the end you also feel a bit resented…
“is bandi ko aakhir chahiye kya 😛 “
hehe…well not resented ..not at all….rather i am pitying her, knowing that its not really easy to come to a conclusion and most of the time we spend judging and comparing…!!…and it goes for both the girls and boys…Its just that i chose the protagonist to be a lady !! 😉 😀
It is quite vivid! And I loved the chronology of events.
Katil poetry bhai keep rocking the same way………expecting many more to come 4m ur side………….:)
badiya miyaan 😀
Interesting (:
the seeking continues whether for the star or for the soul! beautifully written